Hi my name is Skye from Waikowhai Primary School and I am in room Waitemata. I really like your advertisement for bikes, its already telling me to come to buy one. I also like how you tried to put all the information into 1 slides instead of putting 10 slides, did you know that our school is adverting too, for our gala day? My class is adverting for soap, why not come and check out my blog spot on http://wpsskye.blogspot.co.nz/
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hi its declyn from paroa school i was going to klick on the next slide but i couldent next time could you make it longer thanks
ReplyDeleteHey Declyn
DeleteAdvetisments aren´t supose to be long, their only supose to be shorter than what I have beacuse every letter cost a cent.
From Chrysta
Hi my name is Skye from Waikowhai Primary School and I am in room Waitemata. I really like your advertisement for bikes, its already telling me to come to buy one. I also like how you tried to put all the information into 1 slides instead of putting 10 slides, did you know that our school is adverting too, for our gala day? My class is adverting for soap, why not come and check out my blog spot on http://wpsskye.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi Skye thanks for that feedback! Did you know that every letter in an advertisement cost one cent. I have to check your blog out.
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