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Tuesday 23 May 2017

Why Is Facebook Bad???

This week we have been learning how to write a persuasive writing about facebook like if it is good or bad.

7 comments:

  1. Hi Chrysta my name is Riley

    I think that this is true that it is very dangerous for people under 13 that have a Facebook page.It would be terrible if it led blood or death.

    Kind regards

    Riley

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    1. Hi Riley

      Thank you very much for looking at my work and it's true there's a program called murder on the internet. Thank you very much for commenting!!!

      Kind regards

      Chrysta

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  2. Ki Ora chrysta I like the words you said your layout was perfect and the words you said were true Keep up the good work

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    1. Thanks very much

      Hi Amelia thanks for commenting and thats cool that you like it.

      Cheers

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    2. Hi Amelia every persons name should always have a capital letter.

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    3. That is good advice Elisha. Proper nouns need capital letters.

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  3. Kia ora, Chrysta.

    You had lots of examples to back up your position. This is a challenging topic as students younger than 13 can easily access facebook. Maybe another way we can help students stick to the age restrictions, is through educating parents. If parents set up good guidelines and are open with their kids this may be easier to manage. Many of the students that I teach, share an account with their parents or add their parents as a friend so they can keep an eye them. This is the same with snapchat and instagram also.

    Cheers,

    Mr McAulay

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